News Writing and
Reporting
Assignment No. 9
Here are some statements made during a talk by Edith Heather Cahn, head
nutritionist for the Food Studies Association of Chicago who visited the EC
campus Tuesday. Exactly 205 students and
faculty members were at the Campus Theatre for her talk. The title of her talk was “America Fattens
Up” and it was given as part of EC’s Nutrition Awareness Month. All of the following are exact quotes and you
are to use the following as if these were your notes from her talk. Please write a story of between 250 and 350
words in length. Please note that there
ARE style and spelling errors throughout this story. They’ve been purposefully inserted to see if
you will find them and will correct them.
Good luck!
We are no longer
improving our diets as Americans. For
the last five years, one-third of our diet has consisted of what we call
better-for-you foods. But, recently, we
have leveled off from purchasing and eating these lower fat, healthier foods
and are no longer on the way to a fat-free or a lower-fat diet. This is in spite of the fact that there are
more healthier offerings today than ever before.
Instead,
we are seeing growth in another area—hamburgers, French fries, and chicken
nuggets. Americans love their junk
food. This year, in a two-week period
that we studied, Americans ate five million more orders of chicken nuggets, six
million more hamburgers and eight million more servings of French fries than
they did during this same period last year.
That’s enough fat to fill a string of railroad tank cars for miles.
We’re
also eating on the run more. Takeout
food makes up more than half of the restaurant business, whereas only two years
ago, it made up less than a third of the restaurant business. This is why the fastest-growing restaurant
items are soft drinks, French fries, hamburgers and chicken nuggets.
Even though some
fast-food restaurants are putting more salads and yogurts and chicken
sandwiches on their menus, these foods are not that healthy for you. Did you know that the average salad sold at a
fast-food restaurant actually has more calories and fat than a cheeseburger at
that same restaurant? That’s because of
the salad dressing. If they included a
low-fat or no-fat salad dressing, then it would be healthier, but if that
choice is offered, and often-times it’s not, most young people don’t take
it. Also, those nuts they put on the
salads and the yogurt have more fat in them than french fries. And if you think that eating Chinese food is
good for you, stir-fried beef and broccoli, the most popular Chinese food dish,
has more fat and calories in it than a burger and fries. So you not only have to make wise decisions
about what you eat, you also have to look at the nutritional analysis of these
foods that is available at any restaurant if you ask for it. The problem is, most people do not ask for it
because they don’t want to know that their favorite food is so bad for them.
The
fast-food diet is one that will not only make you obese, but it will also clog
your arteries and cut your lifespan. If
you want to list the worst diet possible, this is it. And the worst offenders are young people. Older people tend to watch their diets and
tend to consume the healthier, better-for-you foods. Young people think they will live forever, so
they just eat what tastes good and what is simple and easy to get.
The
worst eaters are college students. In
the two days I’ve been at El Camino College speaking in classes, I’ve witnessed
some of the worst, most unsafe eating I’ve ever seen. Students here are eating themselves into
quick graves. Your diets of
grease-choked burgers and fries with a quart of cola on the side will come back
to haunt you in about ten years. Your
arteries will be so clogged that your cardiac doctor will need a Roto-Rooter to
clear them out.
After her talk, you talked to a professor and a student. Here are their quotes:
Dr. Sally Simson, health professor at EC:
I
think what the speaker said makes a great deal of sense. We are eating worse today than probably ever
before in our nation’s history. I think
it’s great that she made such strong statements. I hope it scares some of our students into
making healthier food choices and eating healthier diets.
John Dough, undeclared major, 20 years old, EC student:
I
love my burgers and fries and I don’t care what that old wind-bag has to say
about it; I’m not giving them up! I’m
not at all worried about dying an early death and I’m not going to change my
diet no matter what anyone tells me.
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